This week you will take the written piece you wrote to go with your three images and refine it. Our goal is to create something someone would want to read in a magazine.
Revision Checklist:
- Read the piece to yourself out loud. You will catch any mis worded statements or fragments. Does the voice of the piece of writing sound like a person talking?
- Do the images line up perfectly with the images? Can you locate where the images match up with your writing?
- Does the piece of writing tell a complete story? Do. you have one moment where we can touch, taste, hear, feel, smell, what is happening?
- Do you have a balance of scene and summary?
- Get closer to your images by really describing what you see in the images and have that be what is the written piece.
- Check for grammar and spelling. “I” is always capitalized.
- Make the text double spaced, use a serif font like Times New Roman or Garamond.
- Do the images need to be edited so that they match more with the written content?
Turn in the three images as separate .jpgs. Turn the written piece in as a Google Doc.
FINAL DRAFT IS DUE ON MONDAY, MAY 11TH
Strong Photography 19-20 